So really like what you did expanding hte story from the original. I like the idea of having your GF being corrupted by the blonde girl and the party questline. Accessing your GF laptop was great a nice little bit of voyerisim if you will.
The art could be a lot better. It might be better if you just used the same girls as in the original but I understand if you are worried about Copyright claims and all that.
Well keep working on the AI art and keep up the good work.
First and foremost, when I saw that it said "v1.0," I thought that meant it was a completed game, but it's anything but. I suspect this is more like "v0.1." But to call it "v1.0" is very deceptive and you should, you know, like, change that.
But anyway, moving past that, I will say I do like this game very much, but it has both good things and bad things about it...
THE BAD THINGS ABOUT IT
By far and away the biggest: Not enough choices. The story is too linear (If I'm using that term correctly). No diverging paths, at least not in this version. There should be more choices and more different possible paths and endings. But even if all choices circle back to the same path hand lead to the same ending, that's still better than no choices at all.
And maybe a nitpick, but the bully character is too pretty. He doesn't look like a bully, he looks like a male model. He should look meaner, scarier. Less Tyrese, more Terry Crews.
(And who ever heard of a college bully, anyway? Bullies tend not to be college material. When I was in school, most of the guys you had to worry about bullying you, regardless of race, tended to drop out before the end of the 10th grade, and the few who remained chilled out once they realized they could be tried as adults. But I'll let that slide because I recognize the bully's presence at school is kinda crucial to the plot.)
THE GOOD THINGS ABOUT IT
The art is spectacular. Spectacular!
It's not afraid to "go there" with regards to interracial cuckolding. There's not many games with the courage to explore that subject matter, but this one has it, and you deserve high praise for it. Fantastic work!
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Anyway, like I said, good game overall, and I will be following and looking forward to further updates. Thank you very much!
I liked it a lot, very good start. I especially enjoyed the interactions between Sandra and Lana. I hope we see them interact more in the future and also that we see them interact with other girls.
There were some things I'd like to see improved though:
I sometimes found it difficult to navigate, especially the school was a bit confusing at first. The way to Jaro is where you'd usually go back to the exterior screen, so I had to search for that one for a while.
At the computer it still says to search for a job and not to work after you've found a job. I didn't think the job was working right at first.
If you meet Lana at college after she's told you she wants to keep a bit of distance she greets you exactly the same. It would be nice if she greeted you slightly differently.
There's no good way to pass the time currently. I often found myself moving back and forth in order to advance time to some time based event.
I'd prefer if you didn't see stuff that the protagonist doesn't unless it's really necessary. During the drinking game would it be possible when the player character leaves the room to offer a choice of whether you want to see what happens in his absence or not?
All minor points, but all quite valid. The biggest problem, though, like I pointed out in my post above, is that there just aren't any choices. There's only one path to follow. There should be multiple paths leading to multiple different endings. But even if the outcomes of all choices circled back to the same path and led to the same ending, it would still be better than no choices at all.
the end of version 1.0 seems a bit rushed in my opinion, not a big deal but i would have loved to see Lana hang around a bit more with the black guys at school after Sandra showed her the videos, slowly changing her look into something more slutty and starting being very friendly to the black guys at college.
i saw a tattoo studio and i bet Lana will get her tattoo, but Lana could start wearing am obvious anklet that the black guys gifted her denying her attraction for blacks to her boyfriend... or what's the theme of this game? Even a sissyfication of the boyfriend?
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Pretty hot game but I hate how the game have a huge cliffhanger now for months. And we dont even know if the game is already abandoned or not.
Should be a web version tho feels like that kinda game
is this game dead?
Hope we see some more soon! :D
So really like what you did expanding hte story from the original. I like the idea of having your GF being corrupted by the blonde girl and the party questline. Accessing your GF laptop was great a nice little bit of voyerisim if you will.
The art could be a lot better. It might be better if you just used the same girls as in the original but I understand if you are worried about Copyright claims and all that.
Well keep working on the AI art and keep up the good work.
First and foremost, when I saw that it said "v1.0," I thought that meant it was a completed game, but it's anything but. I suspect this is more like "v0.1." But to call it "v1.0" is very deceptive and you should, you know, like, change that.
But anyway, moving past that, I will say I do like this game very much, but it has both good things and bad things about it...
THE BAD THINGS ABOUT IT
By far and away the biggest: Not enough choices. The story is too linear (If I'm using that term correctly). No diverging paths, at least not in this version. There should be more choices and more different possible paths and endings. But even if all choices circle back to the same path hand lead to the same ending, that's still better than no choices at all.
And maybe a nitpick, but the bully character is too pretty. He doesn't look like a bully, he looks like a male model. He should look meaner, scarier. Less Tyrese, more Terry Crews.
(And who ever heard of a college bully, anyway? Bullies tend not to be college material. When I was in school, most of the guys you had to worry about bullying you, regardless of race, tended to drop out before the end of the 10th grade, and the few who remained chilled out once they realized they could be tried as adults. But I'll let that slide because I recognize the bully's presence at school is kinda crucial to the plot.)
THE GOOD THINGS ABOUT IT
The art is spectacular. Spectacular!
It's not afraid to "go there" with regards to interracial cuckolding. There's not many games with the courage to explore that subject matter, but this one has it, and you deserve high praise for it. Fantastic work!
*
Anyway, like I said, good game overall, and I will be following and looking forward to further updates. Thank you very much!
Where do you get the alcohol i bought it at the store but i cant give it to sandra
Just find her and talk to her.
i bought like every achol i could buy and it still is locked
decent content but she lost the v cart to fast and work on AI art try achieve https://www.patreon.com/SAMSARA_AI level
I liked it a lot, very good start. I especially enjoyed the interactions between Sandra and Lana. I hope we see them interact more in the future and also that we see them interact with other girls.
There were some things I'd like to see improved though:
All minor points, but all quite valid. The biggest problem, though, like I pointed out in my post above, is that there just aren't any choices. There's only one path to follow. There should be multiple paths leading to multiple different endings. But even if the outcomes of all choices circled back to the same path and led to the same ending, it would still be better than no choices at all.
Very good game !!!!!
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Ai Art, Racism, NTR, congratulations on making possibly the worst game of all time
All those fetishes you don't like are avoidable by simply not playing the game.
great novel so far.
the end of version 1.0 seems a bit rushed in my opinion, not a big deal but i would have loved to see Lana hang around a bit more with the black guys at school after Sandra showed her the videos, slowly changing her look into something more slutty and starting being very friendly to the black guys at college.
But that's a minor issue. So far it's great!
Really good point. All that could still take place in the future, though.
i saw a tattoo studio and i bet Lana will get her tattoo, but Lana could start wearing am obvious anklet that the black guys gifted her denying her attraction for blacks to her boyfriend... or what's the theme of this game? Even a sissyfication of the boyfriend?
All that would be really cool.
nevertheless, keep going.
this project looks good.
(You know I'm not the guy who made the game, right? I'm just a fan like you. Just showing engagement.)
I dont think its that much of a mystery. its a NTR/sharing game. right