The Mystery of Bonertown [v1.0]

First and foremost, when I saw that it said "v1.0," I thought that meant it was a completed game, but it's anything but. I suspect this is more like "v0.1." But to call it "v1.0" is very deceptive and you should, you know, like, change that.

But anyway, moving past that, I will say I do like this game very much, but it has both good things and bad things about it...

THE BAD THINGS ABOUT IT

By far and away the biggest: Not enough choices. The story is too linear (If I'm using that term correctly). No diverging paths, at least not in this version. There should be more choices and more different possible paths and endings. But even if all choices circle back to the same path hand lead to the same ending, that's still better than no choices at all.

And maybe a nitpick, but the bully character is too pretty. He doesn't look like a bully, he looks like a male model. He should look meaner, scarier. Less Tyrese, more Terry Crews.

(And who ever heard of a college bully, anyway? Bullies tend not to be college material. When I was in school, most of the guys you had to worry about bullying you, regardless of race, tended to drop out before the end of the 10th grade, and the few who remained chilled out once they realized they could be tried as adults. But I'll let that slide because I recognize the bully's presence at school is kinda crucial to the plot.)

THE GOOD THINGS ABOUT IT

The art is spectacular. Spectacular!

It's not afraid to "go there" with regards to interracial cuckolding. There's not  many games with the courage to explore that subject matter, but this one has it, and you deserve high praise for it. Fantastic work!

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Anyway, like I said, good game overall, and I will be following and looking forward to further updates. Thank you very much!

I liked it a lot, very good start. I especially enjoyed the interactions between Sandra and Lana. I hope we see them interact more in the future and also that we see them interact with other  girls.

There were some things I'd like to see improved though:

• I sometimes found it difficult to navigate, especially the school was a bit confusing at first. The way to Jaro is where you'd usually go back to the exterior screen, so I had to search for that one for a while.
• At the computer it still says to search for a job and not to work after you've found a job. I didn't think the job was working right at first.
• If you meet Lana at college after she's told you she wants to keep a bit of distance she greets you exactly the same. It would be nice if she greeted you slightly differently.
• There's no good way to pass the time currently. I often found myself moving back and forth in order to advance time to some time based event.
• I'd prefer if you didn't see stuff that the protagonist doesn't unless it's really necessary. During the drinking game would it be possible when the player character leaves the room to offer a choice of whether you want to see what happens in his absence or not?

great novel so far.

the end of version 1.0 seems a bit rushed in my opinion, not a big deal but i would have loved to see Lana hang around a bit more with the black guys at school after Sandra showed her the videos, slowly changing her look into something more slutty and starting being very friendly to the black guys at college.

But that's a minor issue. So far it's great!